the spiderman
학생이 쓴 원문
I saw a doll, a funny looking spiderman, in my dean's bag just now.
Spiderman!!! It's funny!!
Futher, he is a high-lanking official.
So I asked him " Is it spiderman? right?
He replied shyly "My kid wants the doll."
oh god...
I forgot that he is a father having cute children.
Although he is a grumpy guy, he maybe a good father.
Meanwhile, I hated him simply because he nagged me.
I was to blame. ㅠ.ㅠ
I will try to understand him more and more.
Anyway, I don't know what to wear tomrrow.
It's too cold to wear a chiffon dress. It is my favorite item.
강사 첨삭
Hi J!!! Happy Friday to you!!! Your story is funny. But who knows maybe your dean is really a good father and gives what his children wanted. ^^ You know what? You didn't give me a hard time checking your composition. Your sentences are all good aside from the misspelled words. Keep it up okay!!! Have a great weekend!!Lei J
I saw a doll, a funny looking Spiderman, in my dean's bag just now.>>correctSpiderman!!! It's funny!!>>correctFurther, he is a high-ranking official.>>correctSo I asked him " Is it spiderman? right?>>So I asked him, "It's spiderman, right?
He replied shyly "My kid wants the doll.">>correctoh god...>>correctI forgot that he is a father having cute children.>>correctAlthough he is a grumpy guy, he maybe a good father.>>correctMeanwhile, I hated him simply because he nags at me.>>correctI was to blame. ㅠ.ㅠ>>correctI will try to understand him more and more. >>correctAnyways, I don't know what to wear tomorrow. >>correctIt's too cold to wear a chiffon dress.
>>correct
It is my favorite item.
>>correct
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