The Sporting Event
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to see a baseball game in seoul with my friends last year
It was the final game of the league.
I saw that a team from Busan played against a team from Seoul.
I cheered for the team from Busan.
But unfortunately they lost the game.
I had a lot of fun watching them.
강사 첨삭
Hello once again [이름] my dear, it was nice to know that even though you are having a hard time on your work, you still manage to enjoy your time with your friends!I commend you for that because its not quite easy sometimes to balance time between friends and work, but you did it!
Anyway, I heard that baseball is really famous in your country. I wanna hear something about that maybe in our class. ;)
Talk to you again later...^^
I went to see a baseball game in seoul with my friends last year
>>correct!It was the final game of the league.
>>correct!I saw that a team from Busan played against a team from Seoul.
>>correct!I cheered for the team from Busan.
>>correct!But unfortunately they lost the game.
>>correct!I had a lot of fun watching them.
>>correct!
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