The sports that i want to learn some days!
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have an opportunity, I want to learn to shoot and horseback riding. I think those kinds of sports need a lot of concentration and the balance between body and mind.
I realized that I have little talent to keep a stable position. So, I also want to do a kind of static exercise.
Actually, I\'ve learned horseback riding in Mongolia last year, and the guide boy said that I\'m a quite good rider haha!
Anyway, in my personal way to categorize sports, surfing, yoga, shoot and horseback riding are static exercise because they don\'t need to change body position rapidly and keeping stability is the main work.
I also like those kinds of sports because I can fully focus on myself while doing. They don\'t need a team-work and every time I do it, the only enemy is myself in the past. So, I have to fight from the inside and myself rather than fight with others.
Those kinds of characters attract me to do! I think I have to earn a lot of money to learn these sports haha.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for your time and effort in doing your homework! I\'d love to learn horseback riding too. I\'ve tried many times in the past but it seems like I don\'t have a natural affinity for horses, haha. Keep doing what you love! See you later! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
2. I realized that I have little talent to keep a stable position. So, I also want to do a kind of static exercise.
2. I realized that I have little talent to keep a stable position. So, I also want to do a kind of static exercise.
>> I realized that I have little talent when it comes to keeping my balance so I also want to do a kind of static exercise.
3. Actually, I\'ve learned horseback riding in Mongolia last year, and the guide boy said that I\'m a quite good rider haha!
3. Actually, I\'ve learned horseback riding in Mongolia last year, and the guide boy said that I\'m a quite good rider haha!
>>Actually, I learned horseback riding in Mongolia last year and the guide said that I\'m quite a good rider.
4. Anyway, in my personal way to categorize sports, surfing, yoga, shoot and horseback riding are static exercise because they don\'t need to change body position rapidly and keeping stability is the main work.
4. Anyway, in my personal way to categorize sports, surfing, yoga, shoot and horseback riding are static exercise because they don\'t need to change body position rapidly and keeping stability is the main work.
>>Anyway, in my personal way of categorizing sports, surfing, yoga, shooting and horseback riding are forms of static exercise because they don\'t need to change body position rapidly and keeping stability is the main focus.
5. I also like those kinds of sports because I can fully focus on myself while doing them.
5. I also like those kinds of sports because I can fully focus on myself while doing them.
>>CORRECT!
6. They don\'t need a team-work and every time I do it, the only enemy is myself in the past. So, I have to fight from the inside and myself rather than fight with others.
>>They don\'t need teamwork and every time I did them in the past, the only enemy was myself. So, I have to fight from the inside and myself rather than fight with others.
7. Those kinds of characters attract me to do! I think I have to earn a lot of money to learn these sports.
7. Those kinds of characters attract me to do! I think I have to earn a lot of money to learn these sports.
>>CORRECT!
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