The sportsmanship
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the real sportsmanship is enjoying sports itself without obsessing over the consequences.
The sportsmanship is not focusing on the competition trying to win someone, but practicing and focusing on myself and feeling self satisfaction.
Also in the professional sports team, I think it is more important to enjoy the team\'s playing process than to win and lose.
강사 첨삭
Thanks Ms. [이름] [이름]!
I could\'t agree more.Self-satisfaction is way better.
~Lucy
I think the real sportsmanship is enjoying sports itself without obsessing over the consequences.
>>CORRECT!
The sportsmanship is not focusing on the competition trying to win someone, but practicing and focusing on myself and feeling self satisfaction.
The sportsmanship is not focusing on the competition trying to win someone, but practicing and focusing on myself and feeling self satisfaction.
>>CORRECT!
Also in the professional sports team, I think it is more important to enjoy the team\'s playing process than to win and lose.
Also in the professional sports team, I think it is more important to enjoy the team\'s playing process than to win and lose.
>>CORRECT!
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