the stories of three homeless guys.

Nowadays, Korean females become rapidly powerful and speak louder. This is a biting satire on current Korean society negatively. There were three homeless guys with bruises on their faces. They talked each other about the reasons why they had to sleep outdoors. One guy confessed that when he asked his wife giving him a meal, his wife suddenly hit and kicked him off from his home. Another guy said that he was beaten by his wife and bruised only because he looked at his wife’s face. The last one told that when he woke up in the morning, his wife smashed him because he opened his eyes. And he was also driven out from his home. But I think these happenings will be hardly occurred in real Korean society because it's only a immoderate joke.

Hi Ms. [Name]!!!

I laughed so hard with these silly jokes. It exhibited how strong Korean females really are.

Anyway, as I went through your composition, I have found some minimal errors that need to be corrected. Please take note of the corrections for your betterment.

Take care and have a great day ahead tomorrow.

-T. Lei-

Nowadays, Korean females become rapidly powerful and speak louder.

>>Nowadays, Korean females become rapidly powerful and loud-speakers. (We have to bear in mind the concept of parallelism.)
This is a biting satire on current Korean society negatively.

>>Though, this is taken negatively because it’s a biting satire on current Korean society.

There were three homeless guys with bruises on their faces.

>> Correct.

They talked each other about the reasons why they had to sleep outdoors.

>> They shared to each other about the reasons why they had to sleep outdoors.

One guy confessed that when he asked his wife giving him a meal, his wife suddenly hit and kicked him off from his home.

>> Correct.

 Another guy said that he was beaten by his wife and bruised only because he looked at his wife’s face.

>> Another guy said that he was beaten and bruised by his wife only because he looked at his wife’s face.

The last one told that when he woke up in the morning, his wife smashed him because he opened his eyes.

>> Correct.

And he was also driven out from his home.

>> Correct.
But I think these happenings will be hardly occurred in real Korean society because it's only a immoderate joke.

>> But I think these situations can hardly occur in real Korean society because these are only immoderate jokes.