the story about our date "please, Ella!^^"

When I met him at first, he was my boss. We're congenial and have similar hobby and taste. So We're getting close to each other. We often hung out together far away from our company because we didn't want other collegues to know our relationship. But It was very fun and exiting. But now they all know our relationship. -Is that sentense right? please feedback. thank you ^^ -

Dear [이름]^^ Thanks for re-telling your love story with your boyfriend.hehehe. Please be careful in your word spelling and be aware of the verb tenses. I changed most of your sentences in the past tense because the happenings there are already finished or has already happened. See you Monday! xoxo, ~Ella^^   MY CORRECTIONS^^: When I met him at first, he was my boss. >>CORRECT J >>When I first met him, he was my boss. -->> BETTER We're congenial and have similar hobby and taste. >>We're congenial/compatible and had similar hobbies and tastes. So We're getting close to each other. >>So we got closer to each other.We often hung out together far away from our company because we didn't want other collegues to know our relationship. >>We often hung out in places that were far from our company because we didn't want other colleagues to know about our relationship. But It was very fun and exiting. >>But it was very fun and exciting.But now they all know our relationship. >>CORRECT J-Is that sentense right? >>Are these sentences right? please feedback. >>Please give me a feedback. thank you ^^ - >>CORRECT J [you're welcome!^^]