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I was once anxious to study abroad but got married. And now taught my son the English, which I take lesson. If my son grow up, I will accompany him on the trip. So I will have to learn him how to communicate with others. Also I want to raise a child who get education for the whole man. I'll try to be an eager student, devote myself to study and use with worthwhile at my work from now on. Thank you for your attention in reading thus far.

Hi [이름], Wow, it's such a nice story. I hope you can guide your son then in a way that you wanted him to be. I salute you for your perseverance and extra effort. Here are the corrections, - Connie -   I was once anxious to study abroad but got married. >> I was once anxious to study abroad but I got married.  And now taught my son the English, which I take lesson. >> Now I teach my son English as I take my lessons.  If my son grow up, I will accompany him on the trip. >> If my son will grow up, I will accompany him for a trip. So I will have to learn him how to communicate with others. >> SO I have to teach him how to communicate with others. Also I want to raise a child who get education for the whole man. >> I also want to raise my child and give him the best education as a whole man. I'll try to be an eager student, devote myself to study and use with worthwhile at my work from now on. >> I will try to be an eager, devoted student and I will use my time wisely from now on. Thank you for your attention in reading thus far. >> Thank you for your attention and in reading this far.