The Story of Aliens and Space Disasters
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I think alien stories are more popular. Aliens have a lot to imagine because their existence is unknown, and such materials can be modified a lot, making them suitable for readers\' tastes.
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I think alien stories are more popular.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
OR >> I think stories about aliens are more popular.
Aliens have a lot to imagine because their existence is unknown, and such materials can be modified a lot, making them suitable for readers\' tastes.
Aliens have a lot to imagine because their existence is unknown, and such materials can be modified a lot, making them suitable for readers\' tastes.
>> Aliens leave a lot to the imagination, and stories about them can be adapted in many ways, making them appealing to readers.
OR >> Aliens leave much to the imagination. Stories about them can be creatively adapted, which makes them appealing to readers.
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