The strange things Part 2!

2019-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

학생이 쓴 원문

We were scared but our real life was more scared than this situation, so we arrived on the 3rd floor on our feet. As I mentioned to you, I have to make an aircraft for this competition and the foam board is the main material of our aircraft. So, we talked about the next semester while cutting the foam board. A moment later, we naturally stopped talking because we focused on our tasks. But at that time, we heard some weird sound which was totally different from the cutting sound. It sounds like someone is dragging a desk or chair and we noticed that this sound came from the upstairs. We were shocked because the laboratories are located on the 4th floor and they are locked during the vacation season. It means that students can\'t enter the laboratories without guard\'s permission and I\'m sure that a human who has a commonsense doesn\'t want to go to the laboratories and clean inside of it at 9:30 pm. We didn\'t want to experience more weird things, so we left the building. ~To be contiuned~

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]!

Oh my God! That is really weird! It couldn\'t have been some animal or small creature that made that sound. Some kind of ghost or poltergeist must have taken fancy on you guys and decided to hang out. Hahaha. I\'m kidding. I also used to not believe in ghosts but a scary experience also changed my mind. I\'ll tell you some other time XD.

P.S. I know this is not a composition homework so I hope you don\'t mind if I made some corrections here and there.

~~Teacher Kate


1. We were scared but our real life was more scared than this situation, so we arrived on the 3rd floor on our feet.

>>We were scared of horror movies but in real life situations are scarier. We finally arrive on the 3rd floor on our feet.  
2. As I mentioned to you, I have to make an aircraft for this competition and the foam board is the main material of our aircraft.

>>CORRECT!
3. So, we talked about the next semester while cutting the foam board. A moment later, we naturally stopped talking because we focused on our tasks. But at that time, we heard some weird sound which was totally different from the cutting sound.

>>CORRECT! (NOTE: This part made my heart beat faster hahaha. )
4. It sounds like someone is dragging a desk or chair and we noticed that this sound came from upstairs. We were shocked because the laboratories are located on the 4th floor and they are locked during the vacation season.

>>CORRECT!

5. It means that students can\'t enter the laboratories without guard\'s permission and I\'m sure that a human who has a commonsense doesn\'t want to go to the laboratories and clean inside of it at 9:30 pm. We didn\'t want to experience more weird things, so we left the building.

>>It means that students can\'t enter the laboratories without a guard\'s permission and I\'m sure that a human who has common sense won\'t want to go to the laboratories and clean them at 9:30 pm. We didn\'t want to experience more weird things, so we left the building.


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