the strong point of U.S.A.
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USA is the most strongest country in the world.
We call it Superpower.
There are lots of reason why they are getting stronger and stronger.
First, USA have much manpower which make it possible to generate produrct, food, and so on. This is very important because having much population means that USA have large economy.
Second, their technology is in the end of edge, they have stong weapon such as stealth jet, valistic missiles and nuclear bomb. so, they can have an effect on policy of other country.
To make these possible, I think they have a fundemental beliefe that they are one.
even their people consist of many sort of people. though even there are some discrimination existing now, but they acheive that overcome their dark policy and they are getting better in the policy.
No racism, can make them more stronger than ever before.
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Teacher Nina
USA is the most strongest country in the world.
>> U.S.A. is the strongest country in the world.
>> OR: U.S.A. is the most powerful country in the world.
We call it Superpower.
>> correct
There are lots of reason why they are getting stronger and stronger.
>> correct
First, USA have much manpower which make it possible to generate produrct, food, and so on.
>> First, U.S.A. have much manpower which makes it possible for them to generate products such as food and so on.
This is very important because having much population means that USA have large economy.
>> Did you mean: This is very important because having a big population means that U.S.A. has a larger money that other countries.
Second, their technology is in the end of edge, they have stong weapon such as stealth jet, valistic missiles and nuclear bomb. so, they can have an effect on policy of other country.
>> Second, their technology is at the end of edge, they have strong weapon such as stealth jet, ballistic missiles and nuclear bomb. So, they can have an effect on the policy of other country.
To make these possible, I think they have a fundemental beliefe that they are one.
>> To make these things possible, I think have a fundamental belief that they are one.
even their people consist of many sort of people.
>> Even their population consists of many kinds of people.
though even there are some discrimination existing now, but they acheive that overcome their dark policy and they are getting better in the policy.
>> Did you mean: Even though discrimination exists, they achieved to overcome the bad things and their policy is getting better.
No racism, can make them more stronger than ever before.
>> Did you mean: Racism doesn\'t exists but in time, it can make them stronger than before.
Wow. Thanks for doing a lot of essay again. Hihihihi.
How are you? I hope that you are doing fine.
You did a good job in sharing your ideas in writing.
I hope that you will be more conscious with your sentences.
Always be mindful of the correct sentence pattern.
Have a great day.
Teacher Nina
USA is the most strongest country in the world.
>> U.S.A. is the strongest country in the world.
>> OR: U.S.A. is the most powerful country in the world.
We call it Superpower.
>> correct
There are lots of reason why they are getting stronger and stronger.
>> correct
First, USA have much manpower which make it possible to generate produrct, food, and so on.
>> First, U.S.A. have much manpower which makes it possible for them to generate products such as food and so on.
This is very important because having much population means that USA have large economy.
>> Did you mean: This is very important because having a big population means that U.S.A. has a larger money that other countries.
Second, their technology is in the end of edge, they have stong weapon such as stealth jet, valistic missiles and nuclear bomb. so, they can have an effect on policy of other country.
>> Second, their technology is at the end of edge, they have strong weapon such as stealth jet, ballistic missiles and nuclear bomb. So, they can have an effect on the policy of other country.
To make these possible, I think they have a fundemental beliefe that they are one.
>> To make these things possible, I think have a fundamental belief that they are one.
even their people consist of many sort of people.
>> Even their population consists of many kinds of people.
though even there are some discrimination existing now, but they acheive that overcome their dark policy and they are getting better in the policy.
>> Did you mean: Even though discrimination exists, they achieved to overcome the bad things and their policy is getting better.
No racism, can make them more stronger than ever before.
>> Did you mean: Racism doesn\'t exists but in time, it can make them stronger than before.
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