The study group
학생이 쓴 원문
I started to join the study group last week.
We work at the same company.
It is for improving our English.
The first day was last Friday,and it was good.
There are six members including me.
We were studying together at the company,and had lunch together.
I think we need to study more,but some of them are married and they say they are so busy.
I understand a little,so I guess I study more by myself.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I'm glad that you have a study group to improve your English. That's cool! Keep on studying! See you in class later. __karen__
Here are my corrections:
I started to join the study group last week.
>>I started to join a study group last week.We work at the same company.
>>CorrectIt is for improving our English.
>>Correct
>>It is to improve our English. -->BetterThe first day was last Friday,and it was good.
>>CorrectThere are six members including me.
>>CorrectWe were studying together at the company,and had lunch together.
>>CorrectI think we need to study more,but some of them are married and they say they are so busy.
>>CorrectI understand a little,so I guess I study more by myself.
>>Correct
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