The subject of a movie is "Sworn Brothers".
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Shi~
The subject of a movie is "Sworn Brothers".
It is humane and comic.
There was two heros in the movie.
One is a spy from North Korea.
The other is a policeman of South Korea.
A policeman try to live with that spy to arrest more spies.
Two man become to live in same room.
Two man have sorrows each other.
A spy missed his parents in North Korea.
A policeman divorced his wife and missed his a daughter.
Anyway, Two man was enemy but they became to understand each other.
After all, they became to love each other as real brothers.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
The plot of the movie sounds very interesting.
I have seen a few movies with almost the same story. My favorite ones are the movies of Vin Diesel. Do you know him?
Anyway, you got a good composition here but it has a few errors on the construction.
Please check the corrections I made below.
T. Shy
Hi Shi~>> Hi Shy~The subject of a movie is "Sworn Brothers".>> The title of the movie is "Sworn Brothers". (we use ‘title’ for movies, TV shows, books and compositions)
It is humane and comic.>> It is humanely and comical.
There was two heros in the movie.>> There were two heroes in the movie.A policeman try to live with that spy to arrest more spies.>> The policeman tried to live with that spy to arrest more spies.
Two man become to live in same room
>> Two men living in the same room.
Two man have sorrows each other.>> Two men both having sorrows.
A spy missed his parents in North Korea.>> The spy missed his parents in North Korea.A policeman divorced his wife and missed his a daughter.>> The policeman divorced his wife and misses his daughter.
Anyway, Two man was enemy but they became to understand each other.>> Anyway, two men were enemies but they eventually understood each other.
After all, they became to love each other as real brothers.
>> After all, they learned to love each other as real brothers.
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