The subject of a movie is "Sworn Brothers".

2010-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Hi Shi~ The subject of a movie is "Sworn Brothers". It is humane and comic. There was two heros in the movie. One is a spy from North Korea. The other is a policeman of South Korea. A policeman try to live with that spy to arrest more spies. Two man become to live in same room. Two man have sorrows each other. A spy missed his parents in North Korea. A policeman divorced his wife and missed his a daughter. Anyway, Two man was enemy but they became to understand each other. After all, they became to love each other as real brothers.

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Hi [이름]!   The plot of the movie sounds very interesting. I have seen a few movies with almost the same story. My favorite ones are the movies of Vin Diesel. Do you know him? Anyway, you got a good composition here but it has a few errors on the construction. Please check the corrections I made below.   T. Shy   Hi Shi~>> Hi Shy~The subject of a movie is "Sworn Brothers".>> The title of the movie is "Sworn Brothers". (we use ‘title’ for movies, TV shows, books and compositions) It is humane and comic.>> It is humanely and comical. There was two heros in the movie.>> There were two heroes in the movie.A policeman try to live with that spy to arrest more spies.>> The policeman tried to live with that spy to arrest more spies. Two man become to live in same room >> Two men living in the same room. Two man have sorrows each other.>> Two men both having sorrows. A spy missed his parents in North Korea.>> The spy missed his parents in North Korea.A policeman divorced his wife and missed his a daughter.>> The policeman divorced his wife and misses his daughter. Anyway, Two man was enemy but they became to understand each other.>> Anyway, two men were enemies but they eventually understood each other. After all, they became to love each other as real brothers. >> After all, they learned to love each other as real brothers.

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