The subject of movie is "August rush".
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Shy
This weekend is warmer.
I played tennis after a long rest on saturday.
(It is a long time since I played tennis.)
On sunday, I saw movie.
The subject of movie is "August rush".
That is the story about a musician family.
A man is a talanted gitarist.
An woman is a famous cellist.
They loved each other.
But she could not marry him because of her parent's rejection.
They are parted from but she is in pregnancy.
Her father send a baby to the orphanage.
But their son was a genius of music.
His name is "Evan taylor".
Another name is "August rush", this movie's subject.
Uh, The story is long, I will omit next parts.
After all, they become to meet in famous concert in Chicago.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!!
I have also seen that movie before..I actually cried while watching it..The story was tremendous and impressive..I'd like to see that movie again..
See you in class!
T. Shy
(It is a long time since I played tennis.)>> (It been a long time since I last played tennis.)On sunday, I saw movie.>> CORRECT.. You can also say "On sunday, I watched a movie."The subject of movie is "August rush".>> The title of the movie is "August Rush".A man is a talanted gitarist. An woman is a famous cellist.>> The man is a talanted gitarist and the woman is a famous cellist.But she could not marry him because of her parent's rejection.>> CORRECT.. You can also say "But she could not marry him because her parents are against it."They are parted from but she is in pregnancy.>> They were separated but she was pregnant.Her father send a baby to the orphanage.>> Her father sent the baby to the orphanage.Another name is "August rush", this movie's subject.>> His other name is "August Rush", this is the movie's title.Uh, The story is long, I will omit next parts.>> Uh, The story is long, I will submit the next parts.After all, they become to meet in famous concert in Chicago. >> After all, they met in a famous concert in Chicago.
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