The subject of movie is "August rush".

2010-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Hi, Shy This weekend is warmer. I played tennis after a long rest on saturday. (It is a long time since I played tennis.) On sunday, I saw movie. The subject of movie is "August rush". That is the story about a musician family. A man is a talanted gitarist. An woman is a famous cellist. They loved each other. But she could not marry him because of her parent's rejection. They are parted from but she is in pregnancy. Her father send a baby to the orphanage. But their son was a genius of music. His name is "Evan taylor". Another name is "August rush", this movie's subject. Uh, The story is long, I will omit next parts. After all, they become to meet in famous concert in Chicago.

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Hello [이름]!! I have also seen that movie before..I actually cried while watching it..The story was tremendous and impressive..I'd like to see that movie again.. See you in class!   T. Shy   (It is a long time since I played tennis.)>> (It been a long time since I last played tennis.)On sunday, I saw movie.>> CORRECT.. You can also say "On sunday, I watched a movie."The subject of movie is "August rush".>> The title of the movie is "August Rush".A man is a talanted gitarist. An woman is a famous cellist.>> The man is a talanted gitarist and the woman is a famous cellist.But she could not marry him because of her parent's rejection.>> CORRECT.. You can also say "But she could not marry him because her parents are against it."They are parted from but she is in pregnancy.>> They were separated but she was pregnant.Her father send a baby to the orphanage.>> Her father sent the baby to the orphanage.Another name is "August rush", this movie's subject.>> His other name is "August Rush", this is the movie's title.Uh, The story is long, I will omit next parts.>> Uh, The story is long, I will submit the next parts.After all, they become to meet in famous concert in Chicago.  >> After all, they met in a famous concert in Chicago. 

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