The subject of the happiness!
학생이 쓴 원문
I think happiness just depends on each person\'s mind.
If I think I am happy, I will be happy.
But if you think you are not happy, you\'ll be unhappy.
Therefore, the subject of happiness is \'my positive thinking\'.
So what is the small happiness in everyday life?
To be with someone I love.
And to work hard on what I have to do.
And to be able to sleep comfortably when I fall asleep.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름] Ha! Thank you for doing your homework! :)
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
OR>>I think happiness is subjective depending on the person\'s mind.
If I think I am happy, I will be happy.
>>CORRECT
But if you think you are not happy, you\'ll be unhappy.
>>CORRECT
Therefore, the subject of happiness is \'my positive thinking\'.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Therefore, the subject of happiness is on positive thinking.
So what is the small happiness in everyday life?
>>CORRECT
To be with someone I love.
>>CORRECT
And to work hard on what I have to do.
>>CORRECT
OR>>And to work hard on what I do.
And to be able to sleep comfortably when I fall asleep.
>>CORRECT
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