The successive birthday parties to my family
학생이 쓴 원문
Our family have celebrated birthday of family members in a row from January to February.
At first, we celebrate father\'s birthday. He was born 2 days before Lunar New Year\'s Day.
After that, my mother\'s birthday is co[이름]g. Her birthday is January 7th on the lunar calendar.
And 3 days later, it is my grandmother\'s birthday, and my birthday is January 14th on the lunar calender.
Finally about 1 month later, it is my brother\'s birthday.
Surprisingly, we celebrated grandfather\'s birthday when he was alive. His birthday is January 2th on the lunar calender!
So my family have thought about what kind of birthday cake to eat every years!
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Thank you for sharing this fun and interesting fact. ^^ I think it is always difficult for you and your family to decide what cake to buy every time you celebrate birthdays.
-Khai
Our family have celebrated birthday of family members in a row from January to February.
>> Our family celebrates the birthday of each member in a row from January to February.
At first, we celebrate father\'s birthday.>> First, we celebrate my father’s birthday.
He was born 2 days before Lunar New Year\'s Day.
>> CORRECT
After that, my mother\'s birthday is co[이름]g.>> CORRECT
OR
>> After that, it will be my mother’s birthday.
Her birthday is January 7th on the lunar calendar.
>> CORRECT
And 3 days later, it is my grandmother\'s birthday, and my birthday is January 14th on the lunar calender.>> And 3 days later, it is my grandmother\'s birthday. Then, my birthday is on January 14th on the lunar calendar.
Finally about 1 month later, it is my brother\'s birthday.>> Finally, after 1 month, it is my brother’s birthday.
Surprisingly, we celebrated grandfather\'s birthday when he was alive.>> Surprisingly, we also celebrated my grandfather\'s birthday when he was alive.
His birthday is January 2th on the lunar calender!
>> His birthday is January 2nd on the lunar calendar!
So my family have thought about what kind of birthday cake to eat every years!>> So my family has thought about what kind of birthday cake to eat every year!
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