the summary of a newspaper article

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I've just read tomorrow's newspaper article, and I want to summarize it to remember the content better. "The article was about the works of our brain when we take a nap and dream after learning someting new. Researchers had an experiment with volunteers and made them watch a 3D computer maze. Some of the volunteers took a nap after watching. After the nap, all the participants were tested to find out the landmark which they had seen through computer in real situation. The result was like as follows: Those who had taken a nap and dreamed were better on the task than those who hadn't. This study has a practical implication, which is that students might be able to get some help when they study if they study just before they go to bed or they take a nap after afternoon study."

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Goodmorning [이름]!! It was nice seeing your composition early in the morning! =) I hope this would help! I'll talk to you later.. =) happy Monday!!     I've just read tomorrow's newspaper article, and I want to summarize it to remember the content better. >>correct"The article was about the works of our brain when we take a nap and dream after learning someting new. >>The article was about how our brain works when we take a nap and dream after learning something new. Researchers had an experiment with volunteers and made them watch a 3D computer maze. >>correct Some of the volunteers took a nap after watching. >>correct After the nap, all the participants were tested to find out the landmark which they had seen through computer in real situation. >>correct The result was like as follows: Those who had taken a nap and dreamed were better on the task than those who hadn't. >>correct  This study has a practical implication, >>This study had a practical implication which is that students might be able to get some help when they study if they study just before they go to bed >>correct or they take a nap after afternoon study.?lt;o:p> >>or they take a nap after an afternoon study/review

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