The summer and winter
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello sir,
Well said sir! When bad things happen, good things will soon come. But sometimes, when bad things happen it\'s like it\'s one bad thing after another. Anyway, that\'s life. People will have to do the best they can in order to cope. See you later sir!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
There are many contrasted to summer and winter.
>> There are many differences between summer and winter.
Summer indicates hot and lightness.
>> correct!
Whereas winter indicates cold and darkness.
>> correct!
And also, summer symbolizes action and positive and satisfaction, whereas winter symbolizes static and silence and dissatisfaction.
>> correct!
A Nobel Prize Winner John Steinbeck said that what good is the warmth of summer, without the cold of winter to give it sweetness.
>> correct!
An British poet Shelley said \"When the winter comes, spring isn\'t too far away.\"
>> correct!
That\'s right. There doesn\'t last one thing in world.
>>That\'s right! Nothing stays forever in the world.
Many things have happened in our life.
>> Many things happen in our lives.
If the summer pasted, winter will surely come.
>> If the summer is past, winter will surely come.
If it ends bad things, good thing will surely come.
>> If bad things end, good things will surely come.
And thus, everything has two sides.
>> correct!
That\'s the reason that we appreciate everything.
>> That\'s the reason we appreciate everything.
Life is not always bad, but is not always good, too.
>> correct!
We always have to live with cautious and appreciative.
>> We have to live with caution and appreciation.
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