The Sun and Wind
학생이 쓴 원문
Imperious wind makes a bet with Sun.
Wind thinks, he is more powerful than Sun.
So He says, "Let's make a bet about take off that person's jacket from own's power!"
And Sun consents his bet!
First, Wind blows powerfully to him. But, he feels cold and put on other clothes!
Next, Sun takes the sunshine to him. He feels very hot and put off his jacket!
Sun wins! and Wind lose!
I think imperious is bad for people and me.
And I should respect others! I don't want be a like wind!^^
강사 첨삭
Hello there Sarah dear!You gave a very funny story tonight. :p
You\'re right.
It\'s not good to be imperious \'coz it might cause your downfall. :(
Anyway, please check out the corrections below.
I\'ll see you again tonight!Enjoy your day ahead!
Take care!
~~T. Heidi _^-^_
Imperious wind makes a bet with Sun.
>>>The imperious Wind makes a bet with the Sun.Wind thinks, he is more powerful than Sun.>>>Wind thinks that he is more powerful than the Sun.
So He says, \"Let\'s make a bet about take off that person\'s jacket from own\'s power!\">>>So he said, \"Let\'s make a bet. Whoever can take off that person\'s jacket is more powerful!\"
And Sun consents his bet!
>>>And Sun consents to his bet!
First, Wind blows powerfully to him.
>>>Wind first blows powerfully to the man.
But, he feels cold and put on other clothes!>>> But the man feels cold and puts on other clothes!
Next, Sun takes the sunshine to him.
>>>Next, Sun shines brightly on the man.
He feels very hot and put off his jacket!>>>The man feels very hot and puts off his jacket!
Sun wins! and Wind lose!>>>Sun wins and Wind loses.
I think imperious is bad for people and me.>>>I think being imperious is bad for me and for people.
And I should respect others!
>>>Correct!
I don\'t want be a like wind!^^
>>>I don\'t want to be like Wind!^^
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