the teacher

2017-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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I have an English teacher She is beautiful and be kind She is attractive and be smart and be funny So I always wait for classes If the whole world were listening, what would you say? I will say "life is short and time is fast So don't waste your life and don't waste time"

강사 첨삭

Hello, sir [이름]!

Happy Wednesday!


How are you doing today?

I hope you had a wonderful day.


Thanks for doing your homework today.

I feel flattered about your compliments.

Thank you so much! :p


You are also a handsome student of mine.

You are kind, patient, and determined to learn English! :)


Lastly, you are correct about time.

A lot of people waste there time instead of doing something productive or

do things that will make them happy.

Time is a thing that we can never get back once it has passed.

So we must utilize it wisely.


I look forward to seeing you in class.

Enjoy the rest of your day.


--- Teacher JACEY ^_^)/



I have an English teacher
>> I have an English teacher.


She is beautiful and be kind

>> She is beautiful and kind.


She is attractive and be smart and be funny 

>> She also attractive, smart, and funny.


So I always wait for classes
>> So I always look forward for our class.


If the whole world were listening, what would you say?
I will say
   

\"life is short
and time is fast
>> I will say that life is short and time is fast.  

 

So don\'t waste your life
and don\'t waste time\"

>> So don\'t waste your life and don\'t waste time.

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