The teaching profession

The first skill I have is my ability to communicate well with people. People usually told me I have an ability to make comfortable people around me. I also has listend a good listener many times. To be a teacher, a communication skill is a necessary factor and I believe I have it. In addition, I have a high passion to teach and I want to make my class the best than any other classes. I'm ready for developing interesting and useful class material so If I become a teacher, I try to do my best. I don't want to be a normal teacher. I want to hear I'm the best english teacher in my school from students. I also can lead my class because I have many diverse experience being a leader from a class president to a elder sister between many younger cousins.

Hi [이름] here are your grammar corrections for this composition:   The first skill I have is my ability to communicate well with people. >>> Correct People usually told me I have an ability to make comfortable people around me. >>> People usually tell me I have an aility to make people around me feel comfortable. I also has listend a good listener many times. >>>I'm also a  good listener and I listened to many people's  problems many times. (Is this what you mean?)  To be a teacher, a communication skill is a necessary factor and I believe I have it. >>> To be a teacher, (to have) good communication skills is a necessary factor and I believe I have it.  In addition, I have a high passion to teach and I want to make my class the best than any other classes. >>>  In addition, I have high passion to teach and I want to make my class the best among any aother (or all) classes.  I'm ready for developing interesting and useful class material so If I become a teacher, I try to do my best. >>> I'm ready to develop interesting and useful class material so if I become a teacher, i will try (or do) my best. I don't want to be a normal teacher. I want to hear I'm the best e(E)nglish teacher in my school from students. >>> Correct and very good sentence at that! I also can lead my class because I have many diverse experience being a leader from a class president to a elder sister between many younger cousins. >>>I also can lead my class because I have diverse experiences being a leader from being a a class president to being an elder sister between many younger cousins.