: The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashi
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We are living under the flood of information and it\'s easy to find any items on the internet. There are a lot of media contents which provide various information such as fashion, movies and so on. The most influential people are celebrities because they get the most luxury items from the sponsors and those are usually looking beautiful and attractive. People would like to be resemble celebrities whose they like. To accomplish their desire, they would like to buy the items which TV stars are wearing, It makes people to have self confidence that might be a positive effect. However, these trends have more negative effects such as excessive consumption, rack of people\'s personalities and increasing prices on the items. I do agree to imitate knowledge in various field but these consumption pattern doesn\'t help our society.
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Hi there Mr. [이름]! About how many times have you answered this question? hahaha Anyway, my apologies for that. Thanks for the class today! Have a good one!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
We are living under the flood of information and it\'s easy to find any items on the internet.
>>> CORRECT
There are a lot of media contents which provide various information such as fashion, movies and so on.
>>> CORRECT
The most influential people are celebrities because they get the most luxury items from their sponsors and those are usually looking beautiful and attractive.
>>> CORRECT
People would like to be resemble celebrities whose they like.
>>> People would like to resemble their idols.
To accomplish their desire, they would like to buy the items which TV stars are wearing.
>>> CORRECT
It makes people to have self confidence that might be a positive effect.
>>> It makes people build self confidence that might be a positive effect.
However, these trends have more negative effects such as excessive consumption, rack of people\'s personalities and increasing prices of the items.
>>> CORRECT
I do agree to imitate knowledge in various field but these consumption pattern doesn\'t help our society.
>>> I do agree with imitating knowledge in various field but these consumption pattern doesn\'t help our society.
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