The thing I am afraid of
학생이 쓴 원문
What am I afraid of? I think about that. Is it a person? Is it a thing? Is it visible? Is it invisible? When I was a 30s, I seem to able to do everything in the world. However, as I grew older, I gradually lost confidence and courage. It is said time and tide wait for no man. That's right. I am afraid of the passing times that I can't see my eyes. I am afraid of anything that I can see. That is human relation. Now is not the time to make a new person, but it is time to have a deep conversation with someone I have already made. As I get older, human relation become harder and harder. It is simply, when people was a young. But it becomes increasingly complex. I am afraid of that, too. That is anything which I can't see. In conclusion, I am afraid of everything which I can and can not see in the world. I just have to live humble.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I think your composition today is very philosophical. Old men tend to look back and think of their past. I guess we are really getting older because I\'m doing the same thing. I\'m afraid of what the future holds. That is perfectly human!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
What am I afraid of?
>> correct!
I think about that.
>> I thought about that.
Is it a person? Is it a thing? Is it visible? Is it invisible?
>> correct!
When I was a 30s, I seem to able to do everything in the world.
>> When I was in my 30s, I seem to able to do everything/anything in the world.
However, as I grew older, I gradually lost confidence and courage.
>> correct!
It is said time and tide wait for no man. That\'s right.
>> correct!
I am afraid of the passing times that I can\'t see my eyes.
>> I am afraid of the passing times that I can\'t see with my eyes.
I am afraid of anything that I can see. That is human relation.
>> I am afraid of anything that I can\'t see. That is human relationship.
Now is not the time to make a new person, but it is time to have a deep conversation with someone I have already made.
>> Now is not the time to meet a new person, but it is time to have a deep conversation with someone I have already made friends with.
As I get older, human relation become harder and harder. It is simply, when people was a young.
>> As I get older, human relation becomes harder and harder. It is simple, when I was young.
But it becomes increasingly complex. I am afraid of that, too. That is anything which I can\'t see.
>> correct!
In conclusion, I am afraid of everything which I can and cannot see in the world. I just have to live humbly.
>> correct!
I think your composition today is very philosophical. Old men tend to look back and think of their past. I guess we are really getting older because I\'m doing the same thing. I\'m afraid of what the future holds. That is perfectly human!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
What am I afraid of?
>> correct!
I think about that.
>> I thought about that.
Is it a person? Is it a thing? Is it visible? Is it invisible?
>> correct!
When I was a 30s, I seem to able to do everything in the world.
>> When I was in my 30s, I seem to able to do everything/anything in the world.
However, as I grew older, I gradually lost confidence and courage.
>> correct!
It is said time and tide wait for no man. That\'s right.
>> correct!
I am afraid of the passing times that I can\'t see my eyes.
>> I am afraid of the passing times that I can\'t see with my eyes.
I am afraid of anything that I can see. That is human relation.
>> I am afraid of anything that I can\'t see. That is human relationship.
Now is not the time to make a new person, but it is time to have a deep conversation with someone I have already made.
>> Now is not the time to meet a new person, but it is time to have a deep conversation with someone I have already made friends with.
As I get older, human relation become harder and harder. It is simply, when people was a young.
>> As I get older, human relation becomes harder and harder. It is simple, when I was young.
But it becomes increasingly complex. I am afraid of that, too. That is anything which I can\'t see.
>> correct!
In conclusion, I am afraid of everything which I can and cannot see in the world. I just have to live humbly.
>> correct!
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