The thing I would buy if I’m going to save up some money for something

2021-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I’m going to save money to buy some clothes. The weather is changing and that’s why I want to buy some new clothes. But to buy all of the clothes I want, I need lots of money. So I’m going to save money to buy my clothes.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Clothes are a good investment especially to you since you work in an agency :)

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I’m going to save money to buy some clothes.
>>CORRECT

The weather is changing and that’s why I want to buy some new clothes.
>>CORRECT

But to buy all of the clothes I want, I need lots of money.
>> In order for me to buy all the clothes I want, I need a lot of money.

So I’m going to save money to buy my clothes
>> So I’m going to save money to buy new clothes

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