The Thing Make Me Depressed!!

2010-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

학생이 쓴 원문

Studying English is really difficult for me. I havn't talk anyting during the class. My mind had me to speak something in class , my mouth didn't hear that word. I was so stressed today. Though I came here a month ago, my English wasn't improved at all. Everyone looks like enjoy the class -except me. Even though I try to something for studying English:watching American drama without subtitles, reading English novels, writing essays in English, my abiity always stays in that way. It makes me depressed. But I will overcome this sense of failure. If I will study harder, my frustration will be smaller than now.

강사 첨삭

  [이름], I can understand the frustration in studying another language, it must be clearly annoying without any definition – not to be able to express your thoughts and how you really feel about a certain topic or thing. But this I promise you, with constant effort and unwavering commitment, you would overcome your weaknesses and you would become an excellent speaker some day. Keep trying! You can do it! =)   Studying English is really difficult for me. >>>Correct >>>OR It’s really difficult for me to study English. I havn't talk anyting during the class. >>>I haven’t talked about anything during the class. My mind had me to speak something in class , my mouth didn't hear that word. I was so stressed today. Though I came here a month ago, my English wasn't improved at all. >>>My mind had me to speak something in class but my mouth couldn’t find the words. (The rest of the sentences are correct).Everyone looks like enjoy the class -except me. >>> Everyone seems to be enjoying the class except me.Even though I try to something for studying English:watching American drama without subtitles, reading English novels, writing essays in English, my abiity always stays in that way. >>> Even though I try different things for studying English - watching American drama without subtitles, reading English novels, writing essays in English, my ability always stays (in) that way. It makes me depressed. >>>CorrectBut I will overcome this sense of failure. If I will study harder, my frustration will be smaller than now. >>>Correct and a very good and positive sentence at that!

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