The thing that I most looking forward to this Seollal

2021-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I’m looking forward to eat what I want this Seollal. I can’t eat because I went on a diet. But I’m planning to eat delicious food with my sister. We already decide what we are going to eat. I’m so excited and I’m really waiting for it.

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I’m looking forward to eat what I want this Seollal. 
>>CORRECT

I can’t eat because I went on a diet. 
>> I didn\'t eat much because I was on a diet. 

But I’m planning to eat delicious food with my sister. 
>> CORRECT

We already decide what we are going to eat. 
>>CORRECT

I’m so excited and I’m really waiting for it.
>>CORRECT

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