The thing that I want to change in the world.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Alice!
What did you do this weekend?
last friday I should have postponed this class. because I was suffer from enteritis.
Recently, Enteritis is spreaded in Korea.
You should take care, too! ^^
Anyway, the homework topic that you gave me makes me think a lot.
If I have ability to change a thing in the world..um...
I will approach a topic from a new and funny viewpoint.
This age, There is no dout that the English is representing language all the world.
Can you imagine what the world will be like if Korean fill in for English?
It will be fun. Korean sutudent don't need to effor to devote their times to study English anymore. And we can go on a trip comfortably without the burden.
:)
First, I thought If the desease has gone, the world will be a better place.
But it's too boring and common answer. isn't it?
Anyway, It was just wishful thinking. ha ha. :)
강사 첨삭
Hello Christina!
Oh my, what\'s the cause of your enteritis? Are you feeling well now?
Anyway, thank you for this interesting composition. ^^
Hahaha! I laughed upn reading your answer. However, it will be more difficult for us (and other neghboring countries) to learn Korean. As I know, Korean is the most difficult language to learn.
That would be a great challenge for everyone! ^^
Everyone is entitled to his or her own opinions. When given such question, no answers are right nor wrong.
Here are the corrections I made for you.
--- Teacher Alice ^^ ----
Hi Alice!What did you do this weekend?>> Correct.last friday I should have postponed this class. because I was suffer from enteritis.
>>Last Friday, I should have postponed the class because I was suffering from enteritis.Recently, Enteritis is spreaded in Korea.>>Recently, enteritis is spreading in Korea.You should take care, too! ^^
>>Correct.Anyway, the homework topic that you gave me makes me think a lot.>>Correct.If I have ability to change a thing in the world..um...
>>If I have the ability to change a thing in the world.. um...I will approach a topic from a new and funny viewpoint.
>>I will approach the topic from a new and funny viewpoint.This age, There is no dout that the English is representing language all the world.>>This age, there is no doubt that English is the language commonly used around the world.Can you imagine what the world will be like if Korean fill in for English?
>>Can you imagine what the world will be like if the Korean language will fill in for English?It will be fun.
>>Correct.
Korean sutudent don\'t need to effor to devote their times to study English anymore.
>>Korean students won\'t need to give effort to devote their time to study English anymore.
And we can go on a trip comfortably without the burden.
>>And we can go on a trip comfortable without any burdens.:)First, I thought If the desease has gone, the world will be a better place.>>At first, my thought was if diseases are gone, the world will be a better place.
But it\'s too boring and common answer. isn\'t it? >>But it\'s too boring and it\'s a common answer, isn\'t it?Anyway, It was just wishful thinking. ha ha. :)
>>Correct.
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