The thing that’s not yet existing but I want to be invented
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I want a machine that wash my hair. It’s really hassle to wash my hair for everyday. I think many people think same as me. Someday it might be exist but it will be very expensive. But I hope it can be exist.
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I want a machine that wash my hair.
>> I want t machine that washes my hair
It’s really hassle to wash my hair for everyday.
>> It\'s really hassle to wash my hair everyday.
I think many people think same as me.
>> I think many people think the same as me
Someday it might be exist but it will be very expensive.
>> Someday it might be invented but it will be very expensive.
But I hope it can be exist.
>> But I hope it will exist.
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