The thing which I do when I\'m under stress

That\'s a cool way to relieve stress.

I\'ll try to go to Karaoke with my friends more when I\'m stressed. 

Thank you very much for expressing your opinion on this. 

As always, great composition from you, Ms. [이름]. 

Keep it up!

I\'m looking forward to our next classes!

~Teacher Eve.   

These days many people recognize the importance of releasing stress.

>> These days, many people are starting to recognize the importance of releasing stress.

If you don\'t get rid of your stress at the right moment, you might get an illness of the mind.

>> Correct!

>> OR: If you don\'t get rid of your stress at the right moment, you might get a mental illness.

Therefore, I\'d like to introduce how I make myself feel much better.

>> Correct!
 In many K-dramas, actors shout on the summit of a mountain when they have some problems.

>> Correct!

It implies that they try to relieve their stress.

>> Correct!

I also shout like them when I need to control my mind.

>> Correct!

To shout, I go to a karaoke(singing room) with my friends.

>> Correct!
 We usually sing K-pop with dancing, and clapping.

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If I sing songs of my favorite idol, I feel happy.

>> Correct!

My singing ability is not that good, but it does\'nt matter.

>> My singing ability is not that good, but it doesn\'t matter.

It is important for me to enjoy that moment.

>> Correct!
 I love watching Youtube clips and Netflix dramas.

>> Correct!

However, singing with my friends makes me feel much better because it is more active.

>> Correct!

Last Friday, I and my friends sang together for more than an hour, and we could get rid of our stress.

>> Last Friday, my friends and I sang together for more than an hour, and it got rid of our stress.

Why don\'t you visits a karaoke to make you happy?

>> Why don\'t you visit a karaoke to make you happy?