The things foreigners shouldn’t do in Korea
학생이 쓴 원문
As i mentioned, there are a lot of various types of body language in each countries. In south Korea, we shouldn’t gaze strangers especially older people. It means that it looks like rather rude. So if you take a bus or train, you should gaze other place where there are no people such as your phone or landscape.
If you gaze someone for a long time, it means that you would like to fight with him or her.
강사 첨삭
I understand where it is coming from, [이름]! We can really be misinterpreted sometimes just by how we look at others. Thus, we have to be very careful. I appreciate your time answering this question.-Faith-
As i mentioned, there are a lot of various types of body language in each countries. >> As i mentioned, there are a lot of various types of body language in each country.
In south Korea, we shouldn’t gaze strangers especially older people. It means that it looks like rather rude.
>> In South Korea, we shouldn’t gaze at strangers especially older people because it means that it looks rather rude.
OR In South Korea, we shouldn’t gaze at strangers especially the elderly because it is rude.
So if you take a bus or train, you should gaze other place where there are no people such as your phone or landscape.
>> Therefore, if you take a bus or train, you should gaze at other places where there are no people such as your phone or landscape.
If you gaze someone for a long time, it means that you would like to fight with him or her.
>> If you gazed at someone for a long time, it means that you would like to fight with him or her.
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