The things I expect for this new year
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I was expecting for debut this year but I think it’s hard to debut. So I just expect that how much I will develop this year. I’m planning to read many books and be mature than before. I hope I can make great memories in this year.
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I was expecting for debut this year but I think it’s hard to debut.
>> I was expecting for a debut this year but I think it will be a hard time.
So I just expect that how much I will develop this year.
>> So I just expect to develop myself this year instead.
I’m planning to read many books and be mature than before.
>> I\'m planning to read many books and be more mature than before.
I hope I can make great memories in this year.
>> I hope I can make great memories this year.
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