The things that I am grateful about.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
1. In my life, I have lots of grateful things.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I have a lot to be grateful for in my life.
2. First of all, I am grateful about my family.
>>CORRECT
OR>>First, I\'m grateful for my family.
3. someone can say my family is just normal.
>>Some people my say that I only have an ordinary family.
4. But that\'s what I want and they more meaningful for me.
>>But that\'s what I want and they are more meaningful to me.
5. My family is six person, including my grandparents.
>>There are six members in my family including my grandparents.
6. they always give me the love and make me feel confident.
>>They always give me love and make me feel confident.
7. Second, I thanks to my friend.
>>Second, I\'m thankful for my friend.
8. Though, I can\'t say all of them are kind.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Although, not all of them are kind.
9. but they are good and they lead me good way.
>>But they are good and they lead me to the good way.
10. Third, I feel grateful about my lucky.
>>Third, I feel grateful about my luck.
11. It lead me good way and when I try to be something, it make me be something.
>> It leads me to the good way and when I try to be something, it make me that something.
A good life ahead, Bi!
Good essay.
-T. Melody ^^
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