The things that would give a good first impression
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Providing a good first impression to others is very important to start a new relationship. Especially when you are doing a business and meeting lots of people, it\'s important to deliver yourself at a blink of an eye. In order to do so, you need to be very considerable about what you wear depending on situation and how you\'d make gestures as you speak.
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I am impressed with your homework, especially your choice of words. Excellent work!
~Teacher Selene
Providing a good first impression to others is very important to start a new relationship.
>>CORRECT
Especially when you are doing a business and meeting lots of people, it\'s important to deliver yourself at a blink of an eye.
>>CORRECT
In order to do so, you need to be very considerable about what you wear depending on situation and how you\'d make gestures as you speak.
>>In order to do so, you need to be very considerate about what you wear depending on situation and how you\'d make gestures as you speak.
I am impressed with your homework, especially your choice of words. Excellent work!
~Teacher Selene
Providing a good first impression to others is very important to start a new relationship.
>>CORRECT
Especially when you are doing a business and meeting lots of people, it\'s important to deliver yourself at a blink of an eye.
>>CORRECT
In order to do so, you need to be very considerable about what you wear depending on situation and how you\'d make gestures as you speak.
>>In order to do so, you need to be very considerate about what you wear depending on situation and how you\'d make gestures as you speak.
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