The things to want to do.
학생이 쓴 원문
1. What programs do you like to watch on the television and why?
I watched a drama \"The world of couples\\\" on every Thursday and Saturday. This drama was over on previous week. So now I don\'t watch TV programs regularly. I often watched TV shows called \"meok bang\". Do you know \"meok bang\"? This shows scenes of celebrities eating food. I like to watch this show because I feel that I eat with someone, when I have a meal alone
2. What do you miss doing outside your home?
I hope that I can go to the Seoul to see my best friend. And I want to go hotel buffet to eat delicious food.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Lucy
I watched a drama \"The world of couples\\\" on every Thursday and Saturday.
>>I watched a drama \"The world of couples\" on every Thursday and Saturday.
This drama was over on previous week.
>>CORRECT!
So now I don\'t watch TV programs regularly.
>>CORRECT!
I often watched TV shows called \"meok bang\".
>>CORRECT!
Do you know \"meok bang\"?
>>Do you know \"meok bang\" is?
This shows scenes of celebrities eating food.
>>CORRECT!
I like to watch this show because I feel that I eat with someone, when I have a meal alone
>>CORRECT!
I hope that I can go to the Seoul to see my best friend.>>I hope that I can go to Seoul to see my best friend.
And I want to go hotel buffet to eat delicious food.
>>CORRECT!
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