The third day in my new class

2015-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Today is the third day in my new class. I met new PE and art teacher. When I first looked at him, he looked little bit sleepy. The reason why he looked sleepy was he slept late yesterday. After the art class, I had PE class. The PE teacher said, "I'm good at scuba diving and taekwondo." Everyone was surprised at the fact that the PE teacher was good at scuba diving. HomeWork : Can you tell me about something you would happily do again? The thihg I would happily do again is going to Lotte World with my friends. Actually, I was going to go Lotte Wolrd with my friends about three weeks ago. But the next day one of my friend said, "I'm sorry but I can't go with you." For that reason,I couldn't go to Lotte world. So,I want to go Lotte World with my best friends or my new friends.

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]!

Thank you for sharing to me about what happened in your class yesterday.

Thanks also for sharing your thoughts about our topic.
I will see you later!

Have a great day ahead!


Always.
~~ T. Kathrine ^^


Today is the third day in my new class.

>> correct!
 I met new PE and art teacher.

>> I met a new PE and art teacher.
 When I first looked at him, he looked little bit sleepy.

>>  When I first looked at him, he looked a little bit sleepy.

>> or: When I first saw him, he looked a little bit sleepy.
 The reason why he looked sleepy was he slept late yesterday.

>> correct!
 After the art class, I had PE class.

>> After the art class, I had a PE class.
 The PE teacher said, \"I\'m good at scuba diving and taekwondo.\"

>> correct! 
 Everyone was surprised at the fact that the PE teacher was good at scuba diving.
>> 
correct! 

HomeWork : Can you tell me about something you would happily do again?

The thihg I would happily do again is going to Lotte World with my friends.

>> correct!  (thing)
 Actually, I was going to go Lotte Wolrd with my friends about three weeks ago.

>> Actually, I was supposed to go to Lotte World with my friends 3 weeks ago.
 But the next day one of my friend said, \"I\'m sorry but I can\'t go with you.\"

>> correct!
 For that reason,I couldn\'t go to Lotte world.

>> correct!

So,I want to go Lotte World with my best friends or my new friends.

>> So, I want to go to Lotte World with my best friend or with my new friends.

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