The third day in my new class
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Good morning [이름]!
Thank you for sharing to me about what happened in your class yesterday.
Thanks also for sharing your thoughts about our topic.
I will see you later!
Have a great day ahead!
Always.
~~ T. Kathrine ^^
Today is the third day in my new class.
>> correct!
I met new PE and art teacher.
>> I met a new PE and art teacher.
When I first looked at him, he looked little bit sleepy.
>> When I first looked at him, he looked a little bit sleepy.
>> or: When I first saw him, he looked a little bit sleepy.
The reason why he looked sleepy was he slept late yesterday.
>> correct!
After the art class, I had PE class.
>> After the art class, I had a PE class.
The PE teacher said, \"I\'m good at scuba diving and taekwondo.\"
>> correct!
Everyone was surprised at the fact that the PE teacher was good at scuba diving.
>> correct!
HomeWork : Can you tell me about something you would happily do again?
The thihg I would happily do again is going to Lotte World with my friends.
>> correct! (thing)
Actually, I was going to go Lotte Wolrd with my friends about three weeks ago.
>> Actually, I was supposed to go to Lotte World with my friends 3 weeks ago.
But the next day one of my friend said, \"I\'m sorry but I can\'t go with you.\"
>> correct!
For that reason,I couldn\'t go to Lotte world.
>> correct!
So,I want to go Lotte World with my best friends or my new friends.
>> So, I want to go to Lotte World with my best friend or with my new friends.
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