The Three Little Pigs

2012-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Judy

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I read story book. Its title is 'The Three Little Pigs.' The Three Little Pigs are building their house. First pig and Second pig building slack house. So, when wolf blow the wind, their house are broken! But, Third pig building strong building! After a while, they lives strong building together~!!

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear student! =) Thank you for doing your homework. Here are the necessary corrections to your homework. Thanks for the time and effort. Have a wonderful night! ^o^ ~Teacher Meg I read story book. >>I read a story book.Its title is \'The Three Little Pigs.\' >>CORRECT!The Three Little Pigs are building their house. >>CORRECT!First pig and Second pig building slack house. So, when wolf blow the wind, their house are broken! >>The first and the second pigs have built a slack house so when the wolf came and blew it away, their house was easily broken.But, Third pig building strong building! >>However, the third pig\'s house was strong!After a while, they lives strong building together~!! >>After a while, they live in the strong building together!

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