The three things I love most in my hometown
학생이 쓴 원문
The three things I love most in my hometown are my relatives, the house I lived in, and the hill behind my house.
I love my relative because he gives me strength.
I love the house where I lived because I was born and I lived in my childhood.
I love the hill behind my house because it is a playground where I used to hang out with my friends in my childhood.
강사 첨삭
These are wonderful things. ^^
I love my relative because he gives me strength.
>> I love my relatives because they gives me strength.
I love the house where I lived because I was born and I lived in my childhood.
>> I love the house where I lived in because it was where I was born and where I lived in my childhood.
I love the hill behind my house because it is a playground where I used to hang out with my friends in my childhood.
Thank you for sharing this with me, John.
~t. Ally
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The three things I love most in my hometown are my relatives, the house I lived in, and the hill behind my house.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
I love my relative because he gives me strength.
>> I love my relatives because they gives me strength.
I love the house where I lived because I was born and I lived in my childhood.
>> I love the house where I lived in because it was where I was born and where I lived in my childhood.
I love the hill behind my house because it is a playground where I used to hang out with my friends in my childhood.
>> CORRECT!
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