The tickets that are left are the last showing.

2010-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Calling to Mom... ^^ Hi, mom. This is [이름]. I am at the movie theater in Jong-Ro. I am here to cach a movie. I was wating for this movie for ages. I'd really like to see this film. The problem is the tickets that are left are the last shwing. It's going to finish around 12 in the mid night. I don't think there will be a subway or a bus at that time. I don't like to take a texi. Could you please come and pick me up at the theater around 12 ? I am sorry to bother you this way. Please call me back when you hear this massage.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!   I have a few corrections on your message here for your mom.   This is [이름] >> This is [이름] I am here to cach a movie >> I am here to see a movie I was wating for this movie for ages. >> I was waiting for this movie for ages. The problem is the tickets that are left are the last shwing >> The problem is the tickets that are left are the last showing It's going to finish around 12 in the mid night >> It's going to be finished around 12 mid night I don't like to take a texi >> I don't like to take a taxi

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