the time for relax
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When do you feel you need relax? In my case,when i got really big stress, and I don't want anything I feel I need relax. people looked stressful.Most of them they got some problems most of them belongs to relationship.I suggest some things came from books. But the books suggest the same as we know you make your own method like make new hobby, meet some people who really generous they can understand what you feel and listen your speaking all their attention and climbing mountains. There are lots of method we can. Actally I don't know what method is good or not. But I absolutely sure, you should rest when you have time and drinking is not good method. I try to find my own method through do all of things. if someone know good mathods to relief your stress, pleasa tell me.
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Hi [이름]!! Here are the corrections that I made from your sentences. Try to check on them and be very careful not to commit the same mistakes repeatedly. As for your question I know a method to relieve you from stress. For me, I go near the ocean, swim and watch the sun set and then I feel relieved. Have a great day!!
Lei J
When do you feel you need relax?
>>When do you feel that you need to relax?
In my case, when i got really big stress, and I don't want anything I feel I need relax.
>>In my case, I don't want anything but to feel relaxed when I am really stressed.
people looked stressful.
>>correct
Most of them they got some problems most of them belongs to relationship.
>>Most of them got some problems with their relationships.
I suggest some things came from books.
>>I want to suggest things from the textbook.
But the books suggest the same as we know you make your own method like make new hobby,
>>But the books suggest same methods like having a hobby,
meet some people who really generous they can understand what you feel and listen your speaking all their attention and climbing mountains.
>>talking to people who are really generous enough to listen and understand how you feel and mountain climbing.
There are lots of method we can.
>>There are lots of things that we can do.
Actally I don't know what method is good or not.
>>Actually I don't know which method is good or bad.
But I absolutely sure, you should rest when you have time and drinking is not good method.
>>But I'm absolutely sure that you need to have some rest when your time allows you and not to drink alcohol.
I try to find my own method through do all of things.
>>I try to find my method through doing this things.
if someone know good mathods to relief your stress, pleasa tell me.
>>If someone know a good method to relieve from stress, please tell me.
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