The time I spent on making myself better

2018-10-01 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

(Is it right that I should do homework here?) Usually I spend 50minutes to get ready to go work. When I get up in the morning, I wash my face and put on makeup. Putting on makeup takes 20~25 minutes. I think it is better to shorten the makeup time. Anyway afterward I have breakfast for 10-15minutes. And then I get dressed, tide my hair and check if I have everything. These all things take about 10minutes. Then I leave home.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

Yes, it\'s right! Kkkk~

Thank you so much for doing your homework! ^^

I feel you. Kkk~

I think we have to manage our time properly.

Talk to you tomorrow~

Good night ♥


Usually I spend 50minutes to get ready to go work.

>> I usually spend 50 minutes getting ready for work.


When I get up in the morning, I wash my face and put on makeup.

>> CORRECT

>> When I get up in the morning, I wash my face and put some make up on.


Putting on makeup takes 20~25 minutes.

>> CORRECT


I think it is better to shorten the makeup time.

>> CORRECT


Anyway afterward I have breakfast for 10-15minutes.

>> I eat breakfast for 10-15 minutes afterwards.


And then I get dressed, tide my hair and check if I have everything.

>> Then, I get dressed, tie my hair and check if I have everything.


These all things take about 10minutes. Then I leave home.

>> It usually takes 10 minutes then I leave for work after that.

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