The time I spent on making myself better
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Yes, it\'s right! Kkkk~
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I think we have to manage our time properly.
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Usually I spend 50minutes to get ready to go work.
>> I usually spend 50 minutes getting ready for work.
When I get up in the morning, I wash my face and put on makeup.
>> CORRECT
>> When I get up in the morning, I wash my face and put some make up on.
Putting on makeup takes 20~25 minutes.
>> CORRECT
I think it is better to shorten the makeup time.
>> CORRECT
Anyway afterward I have breakfast for 10-15minutes.
>> I eat breakfast for 10-15 minutes afterwards.
And then I get dressed, tide my hair and check if I have everything.
>> Then, I get dressed, tie my hair and check if I have everything.
These all things take about 10minutes. Then I leave home.
>> It usually takes 10 minutes then I leave for work after that.
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