the time I was really happy
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It will be taken longer to think when I was mostly happy, but I can say easily that I feel so excitied when I play soccer.
Because soccer is my best hobby, so my feeling goes up even before playing.
Oh, I got a idea!! recently my best moment was also playing soccer. Since I got injured, it was my returnig match.
I have restraind my self since I got really recoverd. However, desperately it was for a moment that I can feel happy
Few days later, at the second match, I got injured again... so now, I\'m really sad about that I can\'t play soccer for a month or two month..
This time, I will have enough time to recover for my injured knee, and rehabilitate hard.
Oh... as I say, my answer goes to mountain...
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It will be taken longer to think when I was mostly happy, but I can say easily that I feel so excitied when I play soccer.
>> It\'s hard to think about the time when I am mostly happy but I can simply say that I feel so excited when I am playing soccer.
>> It\'s hard to think about the time when I am mostly happy but I can simply say that I feel so excited when I am playing soccer.
Because soccer is my best hobby, so my feeling goes up even before playing.
>> It\'s because soccer is my best hobby, so I feel ecstatic even before playing.
>> It\'s because soccer is my best hobby, so I feel ecstatic even before playing.
Oh, I got a idea!! recently my best moment was also playing soccer.
>> Oh, I\'ve got an idea! My best recent moment was also playing soccer.
Since I got injured, it was my returnig match.
>> It was my first match since I got injured.
>> It was my first match since I got injured.
I have restraind my self since I got really recoverd.
>> I have restrained myself until I fully recovered.
However, desperately it was for a moment that I can feel happy
>> It was for a moment that I felt cheery.
>> It was for a moment that I felt cheery.
Few days later, at the second match, I got injured again...
>> Sadly, I got injured again on my second match just a few days later.
so now, I\'m really sad about that I can\'t play soccer for a month or two month..
>> Now, I am really sad because I can\'t play soccer for a month or two.
>> Now, I am really sad because I can\'t play soccer for a month or two.
This time, I will have enough time to recover for my injured knee, and rehabilitate hard.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
Oh... as I say, my answer goes to mountain...
>> Oh, as I say, my answer just beats around the bush.
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