The times of the year that I give gifts.

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In fact, I\'m not so good at giving gifts.

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So I hardly give gifts to other people.

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But there are the special times of the year that I give gifts.

>> But there are special times of the year when I give gifts.

It is the time when I come back from a trip.

>> These are the times when I come back from trips.

It is because when I think about which things are good gifts for the people who aren\'t with me in there, I can feel like being with them.

>> It is because I feel closer to the people who were not able to join me on the trip.
So, When I come back from a trip, I always bring some gifts and give them to my friends or family members.

>> So when I come back from a trip, I always bring some gifts and give them to my friends or other members of my family.