the topic for tomorrow class

2012-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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Hi, there. I thought about the topic for our class tomorrow. As you know, we have national election for next Korean president this year. One of the strong candidates is Ms. [Name]-Hye who is a daughter of one of our former presidents. We have many intelligent and powerful women, but we have never got a female president through our modern history. In contrast, you had a famous female president like Ms. [Name]. I'm curious how high consciousness you have about the rights of women in the Philippines. I'd like to compare the standards of female rights of two countries. If the range of this topic is too broad, let's specify it to the presidency of women. See you soon :)

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Hi! How are you? I hope you\'re doing fine. Thank you for sending me your composition.Have a great day! -Teacher Aurora-   Hi, there. >>Correct I thought about the topic for our class tomorrow. >>Correct As you know, we have national election for next Korean president this year. >>Correct One of the strong candidates is Ms. [Name]-Hye who is a daughter of one of our former presidents. >>CorrectWe have many intelligent and powerful women, but we have never got a female president through our modern history. >>We have many intelligent and powerful women, but we never had a female president in our modern history. In contrast, you had a famous female president like Ms. [Name]. >>In contrast, You had a female president like Mrs. [Name]. I\'m curious how high consciousness you have about the rights of women in the Philippines. >>I\'m curious about how you are conscious with the rights of the women in teh Philippines.I\'d like to compare the standards of female rights of two countries. >>Correct If the range of this topic is too broad, let\'s specify it to the presidency of women. >>Correct See you soon :) >>Correct  

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