The treatment of ZiKa

2016-05-06 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Let us talk abut ZiKa virus by today. The first thing that I talk with you is how can we cope with Zika virus. Unfortunately, there is no vaccine to prevent or medicine to treat Zika virus. So, We have to be careful when we travel in outbreak area such as tropical Africa, Southeast Asia. The experts about ZiKa said that if you have symptoms of ZiKa such as fever, rash joint pain and red eye, You need to be doubt if you are infected by ZiKa. Many people might not realize they have been infected. The Only treatments of ZiKa that are reported are that getting plenty of rest and drinking fluids to prevent dehydration and taking medicine such as tylenol to reduce fever and pain. And the most important thing when you have a doubt wether you are infected by ZiKa, you have to see doctor or other healthcare provider.

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Hello, Mr. [Name]! ^^ How\'s your day going so far? Thank you very much for writing in our composition board today and sharing about the symptomatic treatment for Zika virus infection. You\'re absolutely correct when you said there\'s no available vaccine or definite treatment for Zika. That\'s why it\'s scary and dangerous. We have very little knowledge about it which leaves us completely vulnerable. I sincerely hope experts would find a cure really soon because more and more people are getting infected. I hope there\'s a way to permanently eradicate the strain of mosquitoes that carry this virus. I hope you\'re having a great day! See you again on Monday. ^^ ~Teacher Charry Let us talk abut ZiKa virus by today.>> Let us talk abut ZiKa virus today.The first thing that I talk with you is how can we cope with Zika virus. >> The first thing that I want to talk about is, how can we cope with Zika virus.Unfortunately, there is no vaccine to prevent or medicine to treat Zika virus. >> CORRECT! OR >> Unfortunately, the market does not offer a vaccine that would help prevent or medicine that would treat an infection caused by Zika virus.So, We have to be careful when we travel in outbreak area such as tropical Africa, Southeast Asia. >> So, we have to be careful when we travel in countries where there is an outbreak like Africa and countries in Southeast Asia.The experts about ZiKa said that if you have symptoms of ZiKa such as fever, rash joint pain and red eye, You need to be doubt if you are infected by ZiKa. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: The experts on Zika said that if you have symptoms of Zika such as fever, rash joint pain and red eye, you need to immediately suspect that you might be infected with Zika virus. Many people might not realize they have been infected.>> CORRECT! OR >> A lot of people might not realize they have been infected.The Only treatments of ZiKa that are reported are that getting plenty of rest and drinking fluids to prevent dehydration and taking medicine such as tylenol to reduce fever and pain.>> The only treatments for Zika that were reported are: getting plenty of rest and drinking fluids to prevent dehydration. In addition to that, patients could also take in medicine such as Tylenol to reduce fever and pain.And the most important thing when you have a doubt wether you are infected by ZiKa, you have to see doctor or other healthcare provider. >> The most important thing to do when you have a doubt whether you are infected by Zika or not, is to see a doctor or other healthcare providers.

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