The trend
학생이 쓴 원문
People who are following latest fashion look stylish.
But everyone doesn’t go well with it.
Especially clothes have relationship with their ages.
I think woman dosen’t have to follow the trend.
But woman has to know the new trend .
That is one of the attractive point.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [이름]ny!
Thank you for stating your thought in a written way. You have a very good view about the topic which everyone must also understand.
See you!
Aki~
People who are following latest fashion look stylish.
>>> People who are following the latest fashion look stylish.
But everyone doesn’t go well with it.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> But not all look fabulous with it.
Especially clothes have relationship with their ages.
>>> Especially clothes have a relationship with their age.
>>> Especially fashion also goes with their ages.
I think woman dosen’t have to follow the trend.
>>>I think a woman doesn’t have to follow the trend.
But woman has to know the new trend .
>>> But a woman has to know the new trend.
That is one of the attractive point.
>>> That is one of the attractive points.
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