the trip to warm country :)

2013-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Jane. Today's homework is same as yesterday :) It is Friday. It's cold in Korea. Do you have any special plan for weekend? Surely, I do. I am going to Thailand with my friends tomorrow. It is my winter vacation. :) Maybe, it will be four nights and five days. I planned to go the traditional flea market, the old temples and the pattaya's beach. There I will do some sea activities like parasailing or seewalking. I am very excited to experience those things. Also I will watch The transgender show. :) I heard that when I watch it, it is very interesting to find out the only real girl of them. So We reserved the show with the VIP seats. haha :) I will greet the new year, 2014 in Thailand with my friends, having a party. Do you envy me? ^^ maybe you do. :) I registered the holding schedule on next Monday and I can study with you next Thursday:) please hope my trip happy and safe. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Happy Friday! Thank you for your composition today! Actually, the homework you answered yesterday was supposed to be the one for today. I guessed you mistakenly opened the wrong page, and so you missed the homework I gave you last December 24. Anyway, I\'m glad to know that you\'re having a winter break. You deserve to have some fun! Take care and see you in class! T. JanE ^^ Hi Jane. >> Correct Today\'s homework is same as yesterday :)>> Correct It is Friday. >> Correct It\'s cold in Korea.>> Correct Do you have any special plan for weekend?>> Correct Surely, I do.>> Correct I am going to Thailand with my friends tomorrow. >> Correct It is my winter vacation. :)>> Correct Maybe, it will be four nights and five days. >> Correct I planned to go the traditional flea market, the old temples and the pattaya\'s beach.>> Correct There I will do some sea activities like parasailing or seewalking.>> Correct I am very excited to experience those things. >> Correct Also I will watch the transgender show. :)>> Correct I heard that when I watch it, it is very interesting to find out the only real girl of them. >> I herd that when people watch it, finding out the only real girl among them is very interesting. So We reserved the show with the VIP seats. haha :)>> So we made a reservation for the show with VIP seats. I will greet the new year, 2014, in Thailand with my friends, having a party.>> Correct Do you envy me? ^^ maybe you do. :)>> Correct I registered the holding schedule on next Monday and I can study with you next Thursday:)>> I put my class on Monday on hold, so I will study with you on Thursday next week. please hope my trip happy and safe. :) >> Please hope that my trip will be happy and safe.

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