the trip to warm country :)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Jane.
Today's homework is same as yesterday :)
It is Friday. It's cold in Korea.
Do you have any special plan for weekend?
Surely, I do.
I am going to Thailand with my friends tomorrow. It is my winter vacation. :)
Maybe, it will be four nights and five days.
I planned to go the traditional flea market, the old temples and the pattaya's beach.
There I will do some sea activities like parasailing or seewalking.
I am very excited to experience those things.
Also I will watch The transgender show. :)
I heard that when I watch it, it is very interesting to find out the only real girl of them. So We reserved the show with the VIP seats. haha :)
I will greet the new year, 2014 in Thailand with my friends, having a party.
Do you envy me? ^^ maybe you do. :)
I registered the holding schedule on next Monday and I can study with you next Thursday:)
please hope my trip happy and safe. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Happy Friday! Thank you for your composition today! Actually, the homework you answered yesterday was supposed to be the one for today. I guessed you mistakenly opened the wrong page, and so you missed the homework I gave you last December 24. Anyway, I\'m glad to know that you\'re having a winter break. You deserve to have some fun! Take care and see you in class!
T. JanE ^^
Hi Jane. >> Correct
Today\'s homework is same as yesterday :)>> Correct It is Friday.
>> Correct
It\'s cold in Korea.>> Correct
Do you have any special plan for weekend?>> Correct
Surely, I do.>> Correct
I am going to Thailand with my friends tomorrow. >> Correct
It is my winter vacation. :)>> Correct
Maybe, it will be four nights and five days. >> Correct
I planned to go the traditional flea market, the old temples and the pattaya\'s beach.>> Correct
There I will do some sea activities like parasailing or seewalking.>> Correct
I am very excited to experience those things. >> Correct
Also I will watch the transgender show. :)>> Correct
I heard that when I watch it, it is very interesting to find out the only real girl of them. >> I herd that when people watch it, finding out the only real girl among them is very interesting.
So We reserved the show with the VIP seats. haha :)>> So we made a reservation for the show with VIP seats.
I will greet the new year, 2014, in Thailand with my friends, having a party.>> Correct
Do you envy me? ^^ maybe you do. :)>> Correct
I registered the holding schedule on next Monday and I can study with you next Thursday:)>> I put my class on Monday on hold, so I will study with you on Thursday next week.
please hope my trip happy and safe. :)
>> Please hope that my trip will be happy and safe.
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