The truth of the Ezept airline crash.

2015-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

It was the quiet night. Ezept airline leave to the Ezept. After few hours,it dropped almost 90 degrees. Finally it crashed and all people died. The reason of that accident was shocking. It was the first officer's suicidal flight.

강사 첨삭

Hello TOM!

Thank you so much for still being my student.

I know that you are really studying hard. Kudos!

I appreciate that you always allot time to take our class.

Please explain the second sentence in class.

I am so happy that you can now compose great sentences in writing. Keep it up.

Teacher Nina


It was the quiet night.

>> It was a quiet night.
Ezept airline leave to the Ezept.

>> (I\'m sorry, I tried to search about Ezept but I didn\'t find any result. What do you mean in this sentence? Can you please tell me about it in class? ^^ )

>> OR: The airplane left the airport.
After few hours,it dropped almost 90 degrees.

>> correct

>> OR: After a few hours, it dropped of almost ninety degrees.
Finally it crashed and all people died.

>> correct

>> Better: It crashed and all people died. 
The reason of that accident was shocking.

>> correct 
It was the first officer\'s suicidal flight.

>> correct

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