The truth of the Ezept airline crash.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello TOM!
Thank you so much for still being my student.
I know that you are really studying hard. Kudos!
I appreciate that you always allot time to take our class.
Please explain the second sentence in class.
I am so happy that you can now compose great sentences in writing. Keep it up.
Teacher Nina
It was the quiet night.
>> It was a quiet night.
Ezept airline leave to the Ezept.
>> (I\'m sorry, I tried to search about Ezept but I didn\'t find any result. What do you mean in this sentence? Can you please tell me about it in class? ^^ )
>> OR: The airplane left the airport.
After few hours,it dropped almost 90 degrees.
>> correct
>> OR: After a few hours, it dropped of almost ninety degrees.
Finally it crashed and all people died.
>> correct
>> Better: It crashed and all people died.
The reason of that accident was shocking.
>> correct
It was the first officer\'s suicidal flight.
>> correct
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