The two brothers

Two brothers are very kind. They work in the field and they have a large harvest! One day, older brother give a sack of rice to his younger brother. But, number is always same! He doesn't know that! Other day, He goes his younger brother's house because of give a sack of rice to his younger brother He met his younger brother! His younger brother carries a sack of rice, too! They give a sack of rice each other!!!! How beautiful they are~!! I want to spend time with my brother like them! But I think, We can't. . . . . . . . . .

Hello Sarah! Did you make this story or did you read this somewhere? :p This is actually a very good story. I think this is how siblings are supposed to treat each other. They should share what they have with one another. :) Anyway Sarah, please check out the corrections below. I also gave some alternative sentences. I\'ll see you later, my dear! ~~T. Heidi ^-^ Two brothers are very kind. >>>The two brothers are very kind. >>>Or: There are two brothers who are very kind.They work in the field and they have a large harvest! >>>Correct!One day, older brother give a sack of rice to his younger brother. >>>One day, the older brother gave a sack of rice to his younger brother.But, number is always same! >>>The number is always the same. He doesn\'t know that! >>>But he doesn\'t know that!Other day, He goes his younger brother\'s house because of give a sack of rice to his younger brother>>>The next day, he went to his younger brother\'s house to give another sack of rice.He met his younger brother!>>>Correct!His younger brother carries a sack of rice, too!>>>Correct! >>>Or: His younger brother is also carrying a sack of rice! >>>Or: His younger brother is carrying a sack of rice too!They give a sack of rice each other!!!!>>>They gave a sack or rice to each other!!!How beautiful they are~!!>>>Correct!I want to spend time with my brother like them!>>>Correct! >>>Or: I want to spend time with my brother just like them.But I think, We can\'t. . . . . . . . . . >>>But I think we can\'t...