the typhoon in Philippines
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Thank you so much for your concern, [이름]. :)
Yes, it was a very unfortunate event.
We all hope that they will be okay and they would be able to spend their New Year with their family.
Hi
Yesterday I heard that Philippines suffered the big damage during Christmas because of the strong typhoon.
>> Yesterday, I heard that the Philippines suffered a big damage during Christmas because of a strong typhoon.
Especially, I heard that there were Cebu, Boracay, Coron and Bohol of the famous tour spot below Luson Island.
>> Particularly, Cebu, Boracay, Coron and Bohol which are famous tourist spot were directly hit by the typhoon.
And there are all of them where I want to visit in but I don’t visit in
>> They are the places I always wanted to visit but couldn\'t.
Whenever I visited in Philippines, I always checked the typhoon generates near Philippines.
>> Whenever I visit the Philippines, I always check typhoon advisory.
Because if the typhoon comes while I stay in Philippines, I can’t do anything for vacation.
>> Because when a typhoon comes while I stay in the Philippines, I won\'t be able to do anything for vacation.
Of course, I wish that Philippine people don’t suffer the damage.
>> I wish that the Philippines will not suffer for any more damages.
Anyway, how was Bagio?
>> Anyway, how is Baguio?
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