the useful application
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Hello [이름]!!
Thanks for sharing your thought about it. As for me, I am more of a person who wants to be updated on what is happening on the world of technology. I have used and tested many tech news apps.
My favorite app of all is Riversip, which is working sort of like Google news, but even better.
It shows you all the top tech news in way like Google news, but it is better because you can select to see the top news of the last hours, today or of the last week (if you were traveling for example). On top of that Riversip can also show you which news your social contacts are talking about and you can add your own favorite topics to watch. Those are then available in \'my news\'.
~Teacher Megan~
These days, there are many useful app we can\'t imagine now.
>> Nowadays, there are many useful apps that we can\'t even imagine to be invented.
Today my wife introduce me a new app for my english study.
>> Today my wife introduce me to a new app for my English study.
This app can translate to English as soon as we tell over the phone in Korean. Chinese and Japanese are also available.
>> This app can translate everything we say in English as soon as we tell it over the phone in Korean. Chinese and Japanese are also available
It seems like it\'s very useful for somebody who can\'t speck local language go to trip.
>> It seems very useful for somebody who is on a trip and he can\'t speak a local language.
I can play game apps which has fancy graphic as a Pc game. Mobile game apps have been progressed a lot compared with before.
>> I can play game apps which has a fancy graphic as a Pc game. Mobile game apps have progressed a lot compared to before.
It has very elaborate network system and we can play with someone who connects at same time.
>> Correct.
Google map containing the map app is the most often used by me.
>> I often use the web mapping service app-Google map.
when I rented and drove a car in Italy, Google map could find the quickest way to destination following GPS when I just input.
>> when I rented and drove a car in Italy, Google map could find the quickest way to my destination using GPS when I just input my destination.
I couldn\'t got lost while I was traveling.
>> Correct.
Mobile messengers and shopping apps are being used at this moment.
>> Correct.
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>> Mobile messengers and shopping apps are very popular at this moment.
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