The value of Education
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Albert Einstein\' \"Education is what remains after one has forgotten everything one learned in school \" shows his thought about the value of Education. In his words, \'everything one learned\' means facts or knowledge such as many formulas of mathematics or English grammar. He emphasized that the goal of Education is not knowledge or skills but the training of minds to think and wisdom of life.
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Albert Einstein\' \"Education is what remains after one has forgotten everything one learned in school \" shows his thought about the value of Education.
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OR: Albert Einstein\'s quote, \"Education is what remains after one has forgotten everything one learned in school,\" demonstrates his perspective on the importance of education.
OR: Albert Einstein\'s quote, \"Education is what remains after one has forgotten everything one learned in school,\" demonstrates his perspective on the importance of education.
In his words, \'everything one learned\' means facts or knowledge such as many formulas of mathematics or English grammar.
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OR: In his words, \'everything one learned\' refers to facts or knowledge such as many mathematical formulas or English grammar.
OR: In his words, \'everything one learned\' refers to facts or knowledge such as many mathematical formulas or English grammar.
He emphasized that the goal of Education is not knowledge or skills but the training of minds to think and wisdom of life.
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OR: He emphasized that the goal of education is not knowledge or skills, but the training of minds to think and wisdom in life.
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